The bee certainly isn't lost here (as it was in the line drawing). The peas look great! My eyes linger on them.
But the onion's a bit of a blank tone compared to everything else. Onions often have great stripy textures and colour variations.
Another area that might stand a second look: the flower pot is a bit heavy, and I'd love to see more emphasis on the little sprout in it than the pot itself. You might try lightening and desaturating the colour on the pot. As for the sprout, when I squint it blends right in with the hatched background there. Maybe it should be darker and the hatching lighter - or try no hatching there? The sprout can/should? be something special in your garden - the beginning of a new life!
I really like the colour and lines of the boots, but for 'Madness' maybe one of the pair fallen over on the ground would be more appropriate. They seem a little too resolute and rock solid here.
Overall a good study of colour and texture techniques with rich results!
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But the onion's a bit of a blank tone compared to everything else. Onions often have great stripy textures and colour variations.
Another area that might stand a second look: the flower pot is a bit heavy, and I'd love to see more emphasis on the little sprout in it than the pot itself. You might try lightening and desaturating the colour on the pot. As for the sprout, when I squint it blends right in with the hatched background there. Maybe it should be darker and the hatching lighter - or try no hatching there? The sprout can/should? be something special in your garden - the beginning of a new life!
I really like the colour and lines of the boots, but for 'Madness' maybe one of the pair fallen over on the ground would be more appropriate. They seem a little too resolute and rock solid here.
Overall a good study of colour and texture techniques with rich results!