There's a very accomplished compositional mix of controlled and lively elements here, the former generating a rectilinear setting for the occasional randomly askew bits. A small point, I began to lose the sense of flatness (which I like) as the items seemed to be stacked further and further back toward the left of the top row. I now see that the jar at the left is actually in front of the lipstick, which brings that end of the row back out toward the viewer, but I think that could have been clearer, especially where the top of the jar meets the lipstick. That said, a strong, well organised illustration, with engaging varied line work. Love the hairpins at the end of the article!
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