I agree with Jorge - you've used the whole page really nicely! On top of that. the concept is super strong - incorporating the jet engines' effects on the crocodiles. It's a really sweet looking illustration all round. Well done!
Hey Hannah, I've seen about 5 students try to illustrate this article, and this is by far the most successful.
I agree completely with what Jorge and Jacinta wrote. The concept and composition are inspired. It took an imaginative leap not to leave the crocks down on the ground - or water.
And your concept and composition bring LOVE to the forefront of the image. The plane, on its way after doing its magic, manages to be both clearly present and a bit in the background simultaneously.
A small suggestion, the baby crocks, hatching, could be smaller.
That said, they add to the charm. Lovely colour pallet, too.
Ah, I just noticed the inverted cloud/sky colours. Blue clouds on a white sky. I love it.
I really like the composition too, it works. I am completely new to photoshop so its interesting to see whats being developed from these articles. Well done `i would not have known where to start with this.
I just like the whole composition of this and how you've framed the crocs in the arc of the aeroplane's trail Adding that texture to the clouds make them interesting too!
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I agree completely with what Jorge and Jacinta wrote. The concept and composition are inspired. It took an imaginative leap not to leave the crocks down on the ground - or water.
And your concept and composition bring LOVE to the forefront of the image. The plane, on its way after doing its magic, manages to be both clearly present and a bit in the background simultaneously.
A small suggestion, the baby crocks, hatching, could be smaller.
That said, they add to the charm. Lovely colour pallet, too.
Ah, I just noticed the inverted cloud/sky colours. Blue clouds on a white sky. I love it.