Strong impact, Sarah, and I like the way your parts jump from one scale to another. Also this has an unusually 3D quality for a flat page. Nice drawings, too, but the mixer and the scribble seem to need further adjustment with Brightness and Contrast - to reduce their yellowish backgrounds.
A graphic designer might complain that you have too many titles here, but I'd have to disagree - I think they're part of the 'in-your-face' boldness of the page.
Your composition has definitely outflanked the original text layout, taken over the page and made it into a visual and narrative world of your own.
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A graphic designer might complain that you have too many titles here, but I'd have to disagree - I think they're part of the 'in-your-face' boldness of the page.
Your composition has definitely outflanked the original text layout, taken over the page and made it into a visual and narrative world of your own.