My problem is it keeps not springing! Here in London anyhow - don't know about Frome. I think the bird and the frog are stronger individually than the page as a whole. Perhaps the top, middle and bottom elements are a little too disparate. If I cover the bottom, I like the top and middle much more and same if I cover the top and middle. There's nothing wrong with contrast or counterpoint, but I think in this case the blue and violet part are almost the same size as the speckled/frog part and they're fighting each other a bit. I selected the bird and its immediate surroundings and copied and pasted it to a new small file. Lovely! The frog is cool too! Perhaps if the speckles were just right around the frog it might work better? Not sure... Good steps, though. Keep up the good work!
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