This is a nicely conceived visual idea, and the subtle colour pallet helps makes it succeed quite well. Love the mysterious colours and growths in the marsh.
Two suggestions.
Perhaps thinner line work in the dragonfly would have given it, and its wings in particular a lighter feel. They are quite delicately put together.
The text is placed in a novel and encompassing way, which I like, but it looks a bit 'computer-y' compared to the rest of the image. Maybe tracing it, as described at the end of Lesson section 4.5 would tie it into the handmade feel of the rest of the image.
All in all a beguiling quality that draws the viewer into a world memories - at least this viewer. Well done.
Love the wings (and the small dragonflies in the background), they really give the feeling that it is actually flying! The watercolor of the scene is so effective, nice palette!
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Two suggestions.
Perhaps thinner line work in the dragonfly would have given it, and its wings in particular a lighter feel. They are quite delicately put together.
The text is placed in a novel and encompassing way, which I like, but it looks a bit 'computer-y' compared to the rest of the image. Maybe tracing it, as described at the end of Lesson section 4.5 would tie it into the handmade feel of the rest of the image.
All in all a beguiling quality that draws the viewer into a world memories - at least this viewer. Well done.