loving all of this, line quality, colours, composition. so lively and the old guy on the scooter is brill! my only reservation would be the little guy on top of the tittle, seems a little out of place.
Hi Sarah, only a year late in my post!
I agree with the great comments you got from the other students.
Several small suggestions.
I like how you've incorporated the article into the illustration, but you could have adjusted brightness and contrast more in the article so you had pure white and black. Give it a fresher look.
The composition is cool - the diagonal against the horizontal article. But perhaps the framing could be tighter. Not sure if we need the bishop there... or if he is there, perhaps his eyes could be directed toward the offending pensioner with something of a Oh-my-goodness look on his face, or maybe a Tut-tut one. I love the tag, but the I in HIC is a little hard to read, perhaps it's the way it's drawn, or confusion with the splattered background?
Overall, clever, funny, spirited and an image that could easily make the reader enjoy the rest of his/her day.
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I agree with the great comments you got from the other students.
Several small suggestions.
I like how you've incorporated the article into the illustration, but you could have adjusted brightness and contrast more in the article so you had pure white and black. Give it a fresher look.
The composition is cool - the diagonal against the horizontal article. But perhaps the framing could be tighter. Not sure if we need the bishop there... or if he is there, perhaps his eyes could be directed toward the offending pensioner with something of a Oh-my-goodness look on his face, or maybe a Tut-tut one. I love the tag, but the I in HIC is a little hard to read, perhaps it's the way it's drawn, or confusion with the splattered background?
Overall, clever, funny, spirited and an image that could easily make the reader enjoy the rest of his/her day.