This composition is lots of fun! It has lots of 'stories' to let your mind wander through. I'm not sure the sub-title should be quite so large/ bold. Conflicts with the hand lettering. Maybe leave it out, as the person viewing/reading will grasp that idea from both your image and by reading the text. There's a bit more mystery without the subtitle, which can sometime 'hook' someine into reading the article.
I would be tempted to align the title with the edge of the left column below it, but maybe that's just a personal whim. Room for some bees to trickle down at the right.
Anyhow, lots to enjoy looking at here as 'the law of the jungle' prevails!
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I would be tempted to align the title with the edge of the left column below it, but maybe that's just a personal whim. Room for some bees to trickle down at the right.
Anyhow, lots to enjoy looking at here as 'the law of the jungle' prevails!