The bold colours and drippy textures are just wonderful, really arresting and powerful. I'm not sure that the purple in the bottom corner is as effective though. Maybe another tube e.g lying flat squeezed out would link better with the top?
I like the drippy effect too... it might be that the eye is drawn down in expectation of a puddle at the bottom of the page or another tube ... it's funny how we're looking for a story
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