The drawings are strong and nicely put together, Lesley, but I'm afraid the would render the text illegible.
Maybe try lightening the drawing, or simply remove the text and present the plants only. It will be interesting to see a colour version! (With out the text.)
Hi Bill, thanks very much for your comment on the garden madness assignment. I agree that the text has become hidden, I think I got carried away with the manipulating the foliage! I'm working on a similar composition using the same shapes, but without text on assignment 2. I'll take simplicity on board as I go.
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Maybe try lightening the drawing, or simply remove the text and present the plants only. It will be interesting to see a colour version! (With out the text.)