I love the coil in the middle. It reflects the sentiment of the words very well, I think. Would you consider using the coil/spring/spiral/scribble in your magazine article piece too? It would add to the sense of 'madness' very well and also the chaos of everything falling out of the briefcase, which I really like by the way.
Thanks for your feedback, Laura. I had actually tried to incorporate some sort of scribble to the composition to give it some movement, but wasn't happy with the results. I've tried again now, and uploaded a v2 (dirty) version which I like.
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