the way you've downplayed everything but the dog and the meal was an excellent decision. in the earlier black and white version i was distracted by how 'heavy' the speech bubble was, but this way it works just fine. the bits of pink on the dog add to the sense that it's a specific dog. they draw the viewers eye down to him and his his special qualities and make us sympathetic to him. well done.
Thanks Tamaann.
Thanks for the feedback I'm guessing tutor Bill, great to hear your thoughts, I really struggled with this, I'm a bit of a fish out of water here but your comments are really helpful and encouraging, looking forward to learning more!
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Thanks for the feedback I'm guessing tutor Bill, great to hear your thoughts, I really struggled with this, I'm a bit of a fish out of water here but your comments are really helpful and encouraging, looking forward to learning more!