I really like the beautiful and sensitive drawing and the the watercoloury / inky treatment with the swirls and splashes is really appropriate. I also like the way you used the text and bubbles, but when it appears small, such as in the coursework gallery, all of this great stuff is masked by the very grey overall colouring, which I think detracts from the actual piece. The colour on the little oven is so lovely, and I would really like to see what you do with colour on the larger areas and your lovely drawings!
I really like how everything kind of fits together, it's like there's a storm in the kitchen, everything's happening at the same time, so it truly is a madness! You've chosen a good colour to create such a stormy and even a bit moody atmosphere!
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