Hi Jon. A good exploration! But you face a difficult problem here because the two largest objects are heavy and static in nature. So that makes them hard to depict jumping and shaking, which seems to be your intention. If you'd used elements in your other black and white Madness composition, the tomato, rolling pin, egg, etc. I think the result would have been more dynamic.
Partially for this reason, the bottle is the most fun to look at and imagine. If the grey image of the bottle had been tilted a bit to the left, that would capture the viewer's interest more - imagining it teetering on the brink of tipping over, or is it actually falling now?!
On the plus side you're trying imaginative methods, and I'd return to this exploratory approach another time.
The hand lettering is cool, especially the word kitchen.
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Partially for this reason, the bottle is the most fun to look at and imagine. If the grey image of the bottle had been tilted a bit to the left, that would capture the viewer's interest more - imagining it teetering on the brink of tipping over, or is it actually falling now?!
On the plus side you're trying imaginative methods, and I'd return to this exploratory approach another time.
The hand lettering is cool, especially the word kitchen.